The Power of the Editor
June 13, 2022 § 37 Comments
By Cathy Shields
Forty years ago, while taking a college course in children’s literature, I set out to write a children’s book. But my career as an elementary school teacher interfered, and my publishing dreams evaporated. When I became a mother of a child with a disability, the next twenty years blurred the boundaries between order and chaos.
By the time I took another creative writing class, my children were teenagers, and I was in my late forties. The teacher wielded his pen like a sword, a grizzled old guy who yelled at students when they couldn’t explain where to place a comma in a sentence. Still, he walked around the room cajoling us with, ‘write what you know.’ I wrote about my chaotic life. The idea for my book jelled with a theme which revolved around raising a child with disabilities.
I joined writing groups to help develop my skills; I learned about first, second, and third persons; first, second and third drafts, how to identify weak verbs, how to self-edit, how to revise, and the differences between passive and active voice. Fast forward another two years. I attended my first writing conference, ready to query my manuscript. I met an editor who taught the craft of memoir. After I described my book, she told me the next step should be a developmental edit.
I did not yet understand what an editor could do and, unwilling to make the financial commitment, I relied on my writing groups and scores of beta readers for feedback on whether my book was ready before I began researching agents. Responses bounced between form rejections and silence. After fifty queries, I got one request for a full manuscript and within two weeks, a rejection.
Would I ever get my book published? I thought my story about how I faced an internal struggle to accept my child with intellectual disabilities, had universal interest. The theme: learning acceptance. I had fought my child’s diagnoses until I gradually came to the realization that my daughter did not need to change, I did. Perhaps I had revised the story so many times that I had become shortsighted. Maybe it was time to find an editor.
The one I found appreciated the story I was trying to tell, and with her help, I revised and sent out a new round of queries. A well-known press showed interest; I had a request for the full manuscript. I am still astounded that I emailed them to get more insight into the rejection.
Their response?
Too much reporting about doctors and specialists.
I sought out a new editor. This time I asked writer friends for recommendations. The person I chose, Monica, taught creative writing at a university and had published a memoir about a difficult subject, the imminent death of her baby. Although her editing wouldn’t guarantee I’d get my book published, I believed her insight could add a new perspective to the narrative arc of my story.
Two weeks later, I received the revised manuscript. The sculpting almost made me cry. The opening scene disappeared; the one everyone told me had to remain for my hook, the one where the doctor labels my child profoundly retarded.
In her editorial notes, she wrote: Don’t give the whole story away in the first chapter.
She moved scenes and pointed out where I needed to build scenes or add dialogue, but she hadn’t twisted my voice into her own words. What she had done was fiddle with structure. That’s when I finally understood the power of a good editor. Monica was the surgeon, I, the intern. She taught me what to cut away to repair and restructure.
I sent out the newly edited version in my next batch of queries, surprised when I received multiple requests for the full-length manuscript. None of this would have happened without my writing community, the previous editors, my beta readers, and the editor with eagle eyes. Last week, I signed a contract to have my memoir, The Shape of Normal, published with Vine Leaves Press. The book will be out in the fall of 2023.
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Catherine (Cathy) Shields writes about parenting, disabilities, and self-discovery. In her debut memoir THE SHAPE OF NORMAL A Mother’s Journey from Disbelief to Acceptance, (Vine Leaves Press 2023), Catherine explores the truths and lies parents tell themselves. Her stories have appeared in Mother Magazine, 50 Give or Take, Kaleidoscope, Uncomfortable Revolution, Write City, and Manifest-Station, and her work was nominated for the Pushcart Prize in 2019. She resides in Miami, Florida with her husband who she’s been married to forever. They enjoy taking long bike rides and kayaking in Biscayne Bay. She blogs at www.cathyshieldswriter.com or you can follow her on Instagram @cathyshieldswriter.
Major congratulations to you!
thank you!
Congratulations on the publishing of your memoir! Your hard work and persistence has paid off, I’m inspired to continue working on mine. Thank you for sharing your story.
thank you Cathy – I wrote this for that exact reason!
Congratulations on the huge milestone in your writing journey, Cathy! Thanks for your story. I appreciate your humbleness as a writer. You post was a good reminder of “Writing is human; editing is divine.” Hope your debut work will be a blessing to the world.
Thank you so much!
You don’t fail until you quit. Glad you didn’t quit!
This is so true & I was too stubborn to quit!
Atta’ girl!
I know from experience as a teacher how very difficult it is for parents to accept the limitations of a learning-disabled child, how determined many are even at the high school level to believe their child is like every other child, and how essential it is that they love them anyway. Also, how this struggle affects other family members, especially other children in the family. I look forward to reading your memoir.
Thank you!
thank you!
Editors are like spinach. Really good for you, but you have to learn to love them.
Agree!
Thank you! Developmental editing is so important. I love my editor, Kate Moses.
Yes Monica Wesolowska is a gifted writer, teacher, and editor.
Thanks, Cathy. You were a pleasure to work with. I’m looking forward to seeing the published book.
Congratulations on your upcoming publication!
thanks!
What a lovely story! Thanks for sharing. I look forward to reading your book when it comes out next year.
I hope you enjoy it! Preorders will be available this August!
What a journey. And how wildly different each version of the book is. Thank you for sharing this journey. Roz
Thank you! Looking forward to it!
Lovely story, thanks for sharing.
My pleasure!
Great, well written story of your story!
Brava and congratulations!
I apologize for not responding sooner – but thank you so much for the comments!
You remind us all that true humility is truth, and none may cavil! Thanks!
I appreciate your comments!
Congratulations !! Blessings to you.
Thank you!
Thank you for this! And congrats on your new book success! I can relate! I recently finished my manuscript and, despite positive feedback from beta readers, I am wondering if I need an editor for one more pass.
That’s exactly what I thought so I did it! Good luck!
Terrific article! I am looking forward to seeing your book in print! Could I also ask, what is the name of Monica’s book? I have a friend soon to give birth to a baby who will not live, and I’m thinking it might be a comfort to her.
Thank you for reading! The title of Monica’s book is “Holding Silvan”. You might also want to check out another book on the same topic: “An Exact Replica of a Figment of My Imagination” – author Elizabeth McCracken
I have added your book to my TBR list. And this editor’s heart is warmed by your story. One of my proudest DE achievements was making an unpublishable ms. publishable (the publisher’s words). He held the rights posthumously. The ms. opening was a big turnoff — the heart of it was buried within (where I found the line I chose as the opener). I did a real structural overhaul. I treasure the first response from the project editor: “Awesome introduction! Oh my god! I feel really invited into the book and want to read it, the EXACT OPPOSITE of how chapter 1 made me feel the first time I read it. Oh boy oh boy.” Sadly, there was an impasse between the author’s sister (who insisted her brother’s photographs of his gardens be used) and the publisher (who knew that new, publishable photographs were necessary), and the book never saw print. It still breaks my heart. . . .
Thank you so much for your words! I’m sorry about what happened! I wish you could have celebrated a win, but t sounds like you had no control over the circumstances.