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350 pages, Kindle Edition
Published October 20, 2023
1) The plot ended up being pretty predictable, and throughout the book, all the little elements meant to build up on the tension and climax felt trivial and juvenile. It was like the mini conflicts were blown way out of proportion. I'm not sure how to explain it better.
2) By the end of the book, it seemed like the hero's best friends went from hating the heroine all the way to the end—even though there had been minimal interaction between them—to suddenly being okay with her, and somewhat interacting easily with her. I also didn't feel like we got to know the best friends as individual characters. They just existed when it was required.
3) THE BOOK WOULDN'T END. There were four or five chapters at the end of frivolous dialogue and scenes that held no importance. Loose ends could have been tied up by then, with the epilogue. Every time I reached a chapter, only to realize I still hadn't reached the epilogue, I was flabbergasted. Those last few chapters felt like the author trying to squeeze in as many trending "shmexy" tropes as she could (e.g., masked man).